The importance of formal education which was always debatable has now become more controversial with some people blame that children should go to school for education in minor age. Others feel that 7 years age is fruitful for learners as comparison early age. In my opinion , I think former prespective is more rational and latter which is rejected by notion. This essay will discuss both views and will lead logical conclusion.
After analyzing the statement, children feel burden on their self. To explain it, parents always want to their children that they excel in their field. So, they send their children in higher school in early age. Where the school bag is heavier than themselves. They cannot bloom and bring out their hidden talent. For example, whether developed of developing countries, where 3 years old age is compulsory for formal education as a result, they feel stress and
burden as well as they does not bloom their self.
However, positively, they are expert in their study. To make it clear, when parents send their children in school for formal education, after that they early time they learn many valuable things which are related with study. In future time they are not face difficult in their study. Furthermore,They develop their confidence and interest which is very beneficial for learners and their future life. Childrens learn many valuable things in minor age when they go to school such as good habits and respect the parents. Hence, early age is beneficial for kid and kith.
On the other hand there are some underlying reason behind why people think 7 years old is good for education. Firstly, children become mature and able to do any thing as well as understanding. To put it clear, in 7 years old, that children's mind big than as compared with early age children. They can receive easily any information without any problem. They are able to do learn formal education. For example the researchers show there are 15% different schools, which receive students at 7 years old as comparison to other country's school. Consequently, they can receive well education without burden. Whilst, negative point is that, 7 years children not suitable their self with early children in one class for former education. To elaborate it, children when learn their study in nursery class where there are some children are 3,4 years old and some are 7 years old that time children comparison to their height related big or small in inches with each other. Some children laugh on others children who are 7 years old . Therefore, that time they feel shyness and cannot develop their self with freedomly.
To conclude, although 7 years old age is good for education but I think early age is more appropriate age for receive former education in the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 470.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94468085106 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49757135697 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440425531915 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1300858787 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.32142857143 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370631428898 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104748048387 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568159344388 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194258225172 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756364676056 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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