It is often say that sports are beneficial . Some people say that sports dangerous games should be banned. Another opine that sports are blessing and must have freedom to choose sports.
On the one hand, human life is very precious. Many players love to dangerous games such as wrestling , car racing and so on. These games can be threat to the person life when perfomed it. To epitome, sports like formula car racing where the player drive the car high speed and there are high changes of accident . It is hit the stands, not only hurting the drivers but also many people sitting in a stand. Hence, there are many players are die and some are injuries. It is a huge loss one person's families who die in such accidents and some have live their rest of life with permanent disability.
On the other hand, more players like to play challenging and dangerous sport . They say that sports give adrenaline rush. They want show to the world they are outstanding than normal people. To demonstrate, kickboxing which game is famous in Thailand where participants get serious injury during performing it. In addition , if dangerous sports banning and it will hurt to the countrymen. So, it is important carefully throughout the merits and demerits of such dangerous before taking any decision.
To conclude, every sport has little and more dangerous. It is upto individuals. I think sports should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, i think, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85062240664 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47042456966 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601659751037 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1095874701 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5263157895 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6842105263 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208500811939 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069773003343 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829895040428 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143958966047 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489188111298 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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