Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people opine, a change in climate could bring abundance of difficulties in running of a business. While other people have opposite view and claim that it provides various opportunities for businesses to flourish. However, I believe climate variation has more negative impact on businesses.
To embark on, certain people think that weather change is advantageous in progression of businesses. Basically, it helps in increasing the demand of goods as well as the income of businessmen. As, with change in weather, people’s needs change, for instance- when climate changes from summer to winter, demands of commodities like woolen clothes, firewood and many more things constantly rise up, so it induces the demands of numerous things and opens up the opportunity for various small businesses to grow. Hence, it boosts up the income of shopkeepers and small businesses.
However, weather alteration has plenty of drawbacks. On the one hand, it creates obstruction for small businesses to run safely in severe conditions. The immediate change in weather like heavy rains force the shopkeepers to shut down their businesses for their security. Also, the adverse effect of flooding from rain can destroy their selling things too. From this fear, many vendors are unable to do businesses for several months, ultimately has detrimental effect on their earning. On the other hand, small businesses are in great loss because of large firms which provide essential goods at home even in harsh conditions. So, indirectly the climate change has negative impact on many small businessmen.
in the light of all these facts it is true to say that, climate change has bad impact on businesses like creating problems for vendors, shopkeepers to run businesses safely and even diminish their sources of earning.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-18 | vishal sachdeva | 78 | view |
| 2021-05-25 | @hoangnguyen | 78 | view |
| 2021-05-16 | vishalpreet | 88 | view |
| 2021-05-16 | vishalpreet | 84 | view |
| 2021-05-16 | vishalpreet | 84 | view |
- Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent technological developments To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Many people work from home using modern technology today Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not employers Do you agree or disagree 71
- Some people argue that strict punishment for driving offenses is the only effective way toward improving safety on the road Do you agree or disagree 84
- Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said It is a big step for mankind But some people think it makes little difference to our daily life To what extent do you agree or disagree 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ve impact on many small businessmen. in the light of all these facts it is true...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32517482517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80861526775 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5581908049 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338327449262 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10761300331 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836781111264 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225166970175 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103234533507 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.