Being a human, total dependency on climate is undeniable.each and every sector is affected by having transformations in nature. Due to this, it is stated that transformations in weather affects the businesses negatively. Whereas, others believe that this kind of changes put a positive impact on businesses. I partially agree with this statement owing to some factors. These both views will be explained in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
To commence with, a host of people deem that people have to face repercussions while having changes in weather in terms of closing shops and businesses. Small businesses are usually affected because they have not extensive network and due to having lack of online service. When climate takes a harsh swing in terms of having heavy snowfall as well as heavy rain for many days. Then it usually demolish the local companies and visitors entering have to ban as well. For instance, in montreal City of Canada, people have to face extreme loss in works, in months of march-april while having heavy snowfall.
In contrast, opponents of this statement argue that climate change can be considered as a boon for businessmen owing to some essential reasons. It is claimed that there are numerous visiting sites, which are visitable just for particular time period. Therefore, people wait for this moment whole year with full enthusiasm. On it's opening, not only large businesses get rewards but also local commercials get benefit by selling their cultural phenomenal. For example, in Rajasthan, temperature reaches to peak in summer season. In this time impossible for visitors to survive there. Therefore, in winters, when temperature returns to normal degrees, high proportion of visitors can be seen easily.
In conclusion, after getting both views into consideration, in my point of view. Although, while changing weather, people have to close properly running works but it happens only while harsh transformations. Otherwise, normal changes usually become beneficial for workers.
- It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings this money should be spent on building modern building instead To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion 72
- People across the world are more similar than they are different To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Scientific research should be the responsibility of government rather than commercial organisations Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men applying for a job with police or military others think women are less suitable for this kind of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ther affects the businesses negatively. Whereas, others believe that this kind of chang...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'demolishes'?
Suggestion: demolishes
...avy rain for many days. Then it usually demolish the local companies and visitors enteri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91590466236 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603125 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7287312633 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21301792238 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589257888216 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042581046567 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131649669101 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357700217628 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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