Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibilities to compact climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment
Part of people are thinking that developing countries are having more responsibilities than developing countries compacting climate changes ,in the other hand others believes that all countries should be having responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
In my opinion; both of them should have the responsibilities for caring about our environment to a reduce pollution all over the world.
First this essay will discuss the first point of view “developing countries should have higher responsibilities compacting the climate,followed by “ all countries should have the same responsibilities on protecting the environment”
So that some people thinks that the climate changes is the authority of the developed countries only because the are the dominants ,beside their developing countries who are not.
Many developed countries helped their regions when they were having climate issues ,as when the Amazon was on fire between the 15th to 22 of August 2019. This was in Brazil, Bolivia,peru and Paraguay, non of these countries did a really big difference although the United States and Canada were one of the reasons to get the Amazon’s back to its nature.
Moreover, the other part of people thinks that the climate stability is the duty of all of the countries all over the world. Even thought the developing countries are not in power, they are trying to reduce the pollution in the air and water by putting filters on the factories chimneys and water pipes and many other ways.
As what happened in Egypt when the river Nile was over contaminated ,but the Egyptian government decided to end it and started to clean the water by using special filters.
At the end climate problems are not slinky caused by humans but also can be happened naturally but all the regions should be trying to handle in anyways. My opinion all the countries should stand with each other trying to decrease any climate problems that could be solved not every country by its own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24458204334 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00435644289 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510835913313 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2981099452 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.4 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58911318174 0.244688304435 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220799758501 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222944740775 0.0667982634062 334% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266977567415 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211113340742 0.056905535591 371% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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