Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Protection of the environment is responsibility of every human being. Some people believe that tackling of climatic changes is more important for the developed cities than developing cities while few other think every nation has the same responsibility. It is important to admin that both views have their own benefits. I will discuss the possible reason that support each view and what benefits that brings to society.
On the one hand, the option that developed countries must focus on climatic combat has huge benefits to the society and nations economy. There are many countries which developed greatly in terms of manufacturing companies which generates a vast economy but these firms cause great environmental damage. Not only development and increasing economic status but also concerning climate causes and effects is prominent for the nation. Developing a country with great climatic pollution is really a disaster.so in the mean while tackling the environmental problems is also important.
On the other hand, every individual area accountable for the climatic changes in their country.In these days every living part on the planet is polluted by the man-made activities either it may developed or non-developed region. Having a splendid climatic scenario provides positive impact on the society which reflects the living status of the people.as a clear example as per the statistics the countries with hygienic environment have the good economical values and prosperity among other nations.
In conclusion, from the aforementioned details, it seems all counties taking equal responsibility on climate problems gives the positive attempt in all aspects of the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54263565891 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9455247782 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2586710608 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402122655963 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129264961833 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541299783137 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207379547615 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830373940561 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.