Some people think that it is necessary to travel to and live in another country to effectively learn their culture and language. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
People believe that one of a few effective ways to study a foreign culture and language is to experience the life in that specific country. In my opinion, while living in another nation has its some merits, the advantages of this tendency do not bring a huge favor to the people who seek knowledge.
On the one hand, there is a certain advantage of living abroad for language learners. By actually spending time in another country, individuals have the opportunities to interact with the locals to learn about their culture and practice their language skills. Because people have the chance to practice their second official language every day, they will quickly get familiar with how the native speakers use their own mother tongue. Thus, individuals eventually develop their language skills in a small amount of time without even a slight notice of their improvement. For example, several exchange students from Vietnam who spent about three months studying in Australia can speak English quite fluently after they return to their mainland.
On the other hand, a few downsides need to be considered. Firstly, many people do not have enough financial resource to support their study from overseas. Therefore, traveling to another nation is not an ideal option that is suitable for every single person. In fact, only a minority of wealthy family are able to support their member to choose this type of language studying. Secondly, people are exposed to adapt bad habits or lifestyles from the locals when they live overseas because they cannot filter everything they observe and imitate. As a result, instead of exploring a new culture and strengthen language skills, they return home bringing unsuitable lifestyles, which damages their original culture.
In conclusion, while it is great to travel for studying new language and culture, I believe that advantages of this tendency do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ion, while living in another nation has its some merits, the advantages of this ten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22903225806 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62121537292 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5935340558 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235090293842 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808385230812 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517369386273 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159133070524 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368238253416 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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