Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think it encourages crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the past century, our kind has made huge technology advancements. Those advancements broadened our views on universe, and changed our lives profoundly. Technology improved our standard of living and made a lot of our time more comfortable. Specifically, I think it discourages crime rates in the world. However, there are arguments on how it might actually encourage crime.
The most important thing which defines modern era is information. Many of engineers and scientists are working to achieve faster and more effective way of transferring that information. Nowadays, information is mostly transferred between computers and servers. A type of the information that every person on Earth needs to use is money. In past, money was always represented by a physical thing, precious metal or a piece of paper. In modern time, most of that money has become digital, it is safely stored in computers of our banks. This presents a big problem for common thieves, who make their living robbing peoples’ houses or robbing people on the streets. It is not effective anymore, because people do not carry much cash in their wallets any more. Most of their money is being used through credit cards, which need extra security information to be exploited.Also, there are also more and more surveilance systems. Cameras are placed through cities and in buildings, as well as alarms, in order to prevent outlaw activity.
Another problem for criminals is the fact that if someone has a criminal record, it could be easily accessed by authorities. For example, if a person with criminal record is trying to smuggle drugs across border of two countries, he will be checked by border police. When they check him and discover it’s past criminal activity, they will probably search the person’s stuff, and most likely will find the illegal substance.
While the technology brings new tools for dealing with the crime, they can be bypassed by smart individuals. The information era brings in whole new virtual world. Furthermore, this created a whole new, usually malicious, profession - a hacker. However, for one to become successful hacker, one needs to be very intelligent and educated in the field. Some of them possess skills to break through even the most sophisticated security systems and do great harm to the victim.
To sum it up, I think technology is discouraging crime more than it is encouraging it. Although hackers present a great danger to the modern system, I think people who are intelectually adept for such activities understand the consequences, are educated and have better alternatives than criminal work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22588235294 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92490617855 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583529411765 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.300938326 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.84 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139388314819 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401215378063 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645161058784 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855491957261 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068934623034 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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