Some people think that employers should give their staff at least four weeks of holidays a year to make employees better at their jobs.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In this day and age, employees suffer from chronic stress and anxiety due to overwhelming workload. That’s why offering a long vacation to workers is believed to promote their performance at workplaces. I partly agree with this point of view; while this solution helps staff be more inspired to work, its potential drawbacks could not be ignored.
To begin with, prolonging holidays has significant positive impacts on the workers’ efficiency. First, enjoying a long break allows them to rejuvenate. Evidently, nowadays, due to excessive work pressure, many employees compromise their private time to perform urgent tasks. Consequently, work-life imbalance for a length of time would make them suffer from both mental and physical illnesses. Therefore, long vacations enable them to stay away from work, reduce stress, and revitalize them for work. Furthermore, benefits such as a long holiday would enhance the employees’ loyalty to the corporations; as a result, the staff will be more willing to dedicate their lives to their job and have better performance.
However, providing extended vacations would bring latent disadvantages to individuals as well as companies. First, people tend to procrastinate after a long break. To be more specific, when employees are familiar with the holidays’ schedule, returning to work with a strict timetable would be a nightmare that makes them feel stressed and exhausted. Moreover, the interruption of the manufacturing process for a long time would reduce the productivity and performance of the firms. In fact, many companies face economic crisis during long festival or summer breaks.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that a four-week-holiday somewhat could enhance the workers’ efficiency; however, is not an optimum measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56043956044 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11088444132 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.676318882 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15459260079 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471480862884 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501182478374 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089418016731 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269352354129 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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