Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that dress codes should not be applied to modern workplaces, people should focus on work performance instead. From my point of view, I partially agree with this notion for the following chief reasons.
On the one hand, it would be inflexible if a company has a strict dress code because clothing comes as a matter of personal interest. Business owners tend to build a creative, energetic, and friendly work environment for their staff, so free dressing by everyone’s taste is an innovative implementation and may improve work effectiveness especially in tasks requiring creativity. For example, a design staff would be more satisfied with her favorite clothes because they can express her personality, making her more enjoyable and imaginative to come up with great ideas. As a result, productivity could be enhanced dramatically compared to that produced by a designer who always feels confined in a company uniform.
On the other hand, I believe that a dress code is necessary for some work situations because work performance is directly related to the sense of professionalism. In some companies without uniform or dressing restrictions, staff may wear inappropriate clothes to the workplace, which can cause annoyance for others, and lose respectability at work. Moreover, people working in customer service areas need to dress up to make an impression on customers, it is better if these employees wear a uniform that can be easily recognized, accentuating the professionalism of that organization. For example, when I consult about a product, I would find a sales staff in a garment presenting the company logo more trustworthy than a salesperson wearing a freestyle casual cloth.
In conclusion, I think that employees’ dress should be controlled in some work contexts which require competent style to gain customer’s trust. However, it should be adjusted flexibly to suit characteristics of work such as in creative areas.
- In many nations it is evident that there is an increasing disinterest in science subjects This essay discusses some remarkable reasons and their impacts regarding this alarming rate 56
- Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport Why is it not popular in many places And how to increase its popularity 89
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think childcare centers provide the best care Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tics of work such as in creative areas.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32154340836 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23206630865 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.532843837 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.916666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191012839308 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742315186514 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500639276401 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123211964626 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240397752447 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.