It is said that employers should not care about the way their employees dresscode because what matters is the quality of their work. I strongly disagree with this point, the following paragraph i will discuss my view point.
From my point of view, people go to the work need to wear formal clothes since the clothes make you more professional and reliable. People should not wear the informal clothes to come public area like company or school. This activity is not impolite and everyone do not like to communicate with person who have the informal clothes.It crystal clear that the human always love beautiful things so that is a basic reason why employers should wear formal clothes in stead of free style. For example, some company ban employers wear free style when they go to work, in stead of that they need to wear uniforms that the company establish. Its make employers have a good point in someone view.
Moreover, the think that employers do not care about their dresscode can improve the quality of their work when they go to the company is go wrong. Some situation the free clothes make people more comfortable but people can not wear free style to communicate with partner. When people meet someone in important occassion you should care about your dresscode because it help you a lot things.The nice clothes or comfortable clothes can make you more confident and bring up a lot of opportunity. However, the lack of knowledge about fashion can make people has wrong aware of about clothes, its make people look badly when you front of someone. Therefore, its very essential for employers concern about the dresscode when they go work.
In conclusion. i strongly suppose with opinion that employers should care about the way about dresscode its improve higher success of their oppoturnity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...w point. From my point of view, people go to the work need to wear forma...
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...th person who have the informal clothes.It crystal clear that the human always lov...
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...hy employers should wear formal clothes in stead of free style. For example, some company b...
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...oint in someone view. Moreover, the think that employers do not care about their ...
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...ld care about your dresscode because it help you a lot things.The nice clothes or co...
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...sscode because it help you a lot things.The nice clothes or comfortable clothes can...
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...out the dresscode when they go work. In conclusion. i strongly suppose with o...
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...e higher success of their oppoturnity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44850637664 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460784313725 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.47870261 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346253493141 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131446329112 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153273298144 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249699635942 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117051618464 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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It is said that employers should not car...
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...ith this point, the following paragraph i will discuss my view point. Fr...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...agraph i will discuss my view point. From my point of view, people go to the...
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...w point. From my point of view, people go to the work need to wear forma...
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...th person who have the informal clothes.It crystal clear that the human always lov...
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
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...hy employers should wear formal clothes in stead of free style. For example, some company b...
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...s wear free style when they go to work, in stead of that they need to wear uniforms that th...
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'views'.
Suggestion: views
... employers have a good point in someone view. Moreover, the think that emplo...
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...oint in someone view. Moreover, the think that employers do not care about their ...
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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...ld care about your dresscode because it help you a lot things.The nice clothes or co...
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Suggestion: The
...sscode because it help you a lot things.The nice clothes or comfortable clothes can...
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...out the dresscode when they go work. In conclusion. i strongly suppose with o...
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...hen they go work. In conclusion. i strongly suppose with opinion that empl...
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...e higher success of their oppoturnity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44850637664 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460784313725 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.47870261 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346253493141 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131446329112 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153273298144 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249699635942 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117051618464 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.