It is supposed that employers don't need to pay attention in employees's dressing because their quality of working is the most important. This essay will show my halfly agree toward this statement.
To begin with, it is true that quality of work that employees can do is the most neccesssary and their dress just occupy a little part. If company or factory already have their own uniform, they definitely can request their employees to wear them daily without any thinking about dress. Opposition, company which don't have general uniform and they let their staff to wearing freedom clothes, shouldn't complain or care about what they are wearing. Of course that these company always have the rules about limited type of clothes that staff can wear. For example, they mustn't wear bikini, underwear, some thing that related to offensive clothes to workplace. In addition, company should encourage employees to wearing comfortable clothes to work more efficiently.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
It is supposed that employers dont need to pay attention in employeess dre...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... about dress. Opposition, company which dont have general uniform and they let their...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...their staff to wearing freedom clothes, shouldnt complain or care about what they are we...
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Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...t what they are wearing. Of course that these company always have the rules about limited typ...
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Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
... that staff can wear. For example, they mustnt wear bikini, underwear, some thing that...
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Line 2, column 598, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...le, they mustnt wear bikini, underwear, some thing that related to offensive clothes to wo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, of course, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2064516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46647447949 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3428327616 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298099947815 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118447918122 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790808208084 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211254983164 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296572557947 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
It is supposed that employers dont need to pay attention in employeess dre...
^^^^
Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... about dress. Opposition, company which dont have general uniform and they let their...
^^^^
Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...their staff to wearing freedom clothes, shouldnt complain or care about what they are we...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...t what they are wearing. Of course that these company always have the rules about limited typ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
... that staff can wear. For example, they mustnt wear bikini, underwear, some thing that...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 598, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...le, they mustnt wear bikini, underwear, some thing that related to offensive clothes to wo...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in addition, of course, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2064516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46647447949 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664516129032 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3428327616 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298099947815 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118447918122 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790808208084 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211254983164 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296572557947 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.