Modern civilization makes quality of people lifes better than ancient society. This essay will show my totally agree opinion towards this statement.
To begin with, in modernization century, technology help various aspect in life more convinient. Go through a thousand years, with a developing world, people invented huge things to basical life style. For example, mobile phones can connect people from two different location, automatic machine can save time for user and it just take a few minutes to control this machine into correct way. That's mean, when ancient people need to use tradition tools and spend long time to do something, modern residence replace it by technology.
Furthermore, transportation is the one which is change a lot in these day. With the born of car, motorbike, the movement of people is become rocket science. They can sit on the vehicles and drive it to any where they want, while ancient people need to go by foot for a long way. The greatest transportation that modern civilzation had ever been invented is airplane. To be more specific, when it is nearly undoable for them to go to another part of the world, nowaday airplane become common that you can go around the world easily because it can reach a thousand kilometres per hour.
In conclusion, because of thousand years had gone through, it is fortunately that modern civilzation change quality of people lifes than ancient society, with uncountable development involved in many aspects like technology and transportation.
- The table below gives information about students studying in six departments in an Australian university in 2011
- People living in the twenty first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe children should be free to do what they want Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
...can sit on the vehicles and drive it to any where they want, while ancient people need to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12955465587 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79477763262 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.003411204 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.583333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150002663366 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601152614914 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605348834098 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106755745064 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404909538746 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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