Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and the government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. What extent do you Agree or disagree .
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that university education is provided by the government free of cost to all the students. presenting my view it is a further development of our country. I would intend to explore my view in following paragraphs.
On one side of the argument that there are people who argue that it is a valuable development and boon which are provided by the government considerably out weigh it's disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that higher education is so much costly. so this aprochment reduce illustration. The first chief cause might be that the economical burden on the parents. This could be because of students can be easily stuyding in the university. Moreover, students are more likely to learn their intrusting subjects. As a consequence, Students have to realise their responsibility for our country and are more likely to do social work. For instance, Dr Rajinder parshad was studying in school free of cost. After study completion they did 5 year social work and 1st president of India.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that some students think that education is free for me and they never show the sympathy toward the study and some drawbacks of this apprrochment. However, high cost of teacher's salary is paid by the government which is more effective to the money of country. 'Some famalies' are capable of paying the cost of students fees. Such as,Some students take the extra money to the parents and consume in the illegal way to purchase the alcohol and drug and uesd it.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to government pay the cost of higher education of students. But in opinion it is a effective way to reduce the illustration in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Presenting
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Some
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81879194631 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75261892567 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2778773324 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182964437723 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05031991156 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472173164368 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947814384028 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499456843927 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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