Thanks to society development, people produced lots of goods, products and tons of food. Therefore, people pay more attention to what they eat every day. So, a few people believe that everyone should be vegetarian as humans' bodies do not need meat to have a healthy diet. Personally, I agree with this phenomenon up to several points.
On the one hand, there are a lot of negative responses due to this statement because of a primary reason. Indeed, people still need nutrients to survive as meat products provide plenty of energy and easily afford the human body's demands. Since a few specific nutrients such as protein are not found in any vegetables or fruits, they have a different taste and lose appetite. Gradually, it will be accompanied by muscle aches, nausea, fatigue, and specific intestinal issues. Plus, not many people can tolerate vegetarianism because their bodies are different.
On the other hand, vegetarians also have two significant reasons. Firstly, by increasing the number of fruits and vegetables, the human's body can avoid illnesses. Because of massive amounts of vitamins and minerals, people's physical health may increase unexpectedly, which increases the average person's age in society. Secondly, due to the increasing pace of meat production, un-humanity slaughterhouses exist to make money from animals. In their production chain, they add several chemistries to reduce the products' price and lengthen expiration. So, by being a vegetarian, people can avoid these risks.
In short, although meat products provide more energy and have their own taste, being a vegetarian is still a better choice for humankind. So, personally, I think people should limit their meat consumption and try to become vegetarian.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33695652174 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85925124558 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.37246094 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6470588235 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295534457505 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874090530579 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102651282815 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187488872571 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983877653423 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.