some people think that famous people can help international aid organization to draw attention to important problem. other believe that the celebrities can make the problem seem less important. discuses both view in give your opinion.
given the widespread use of social media and broadcasts, famous people in those area have influence in public. many believed that famous people can bring attention to our vital universal problems. on the other hand, some people claims that not only the cant grab public attention to deal with problems but also they couse the problem seems less vital. the perennial question is celebrities can have positive impact for our serious problems or not.
the blinkered attitude claims that famous people can bring attention for a short time and after that after that people forget was the problems are. this pointless view implies this way is not a efficient way to address our world problems. one reason for this is a example of global warming that many famous people make an effort to grab public attention to this matter and they arent successful and yet climet change is a serious problem. set against this is the view that, however, climet change still remain a big challenge, many people are more aware about this issue now. clearly, celebrities play an indispensable role in this matter.
another way of looking at this is that famous people in regard at their fans, it is possible to aware public about our planet issues. moreover, force politician to concerning about those problems. the contrasting view hold that public couldn't change the main policy of the government, however, this is hopeless attitude and public can chang policy. it is accepted that influence of famous people can initially be less important but in long run it worth it.
on balance, not only celebrities have influence on people but also it is their duty to aware people and politician about our problems. those popularity is a means to grab attention of public.
- the three pie chart show the production consumption and where the profit goes around the world 67
- The chart showS the water level of 6 cities of Australia in October 2009 to October 2010
- Interview form a basic selection criteria for the most large companies However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- The chart show the water level of 6 cities of Australia in October 2009 to October 2010
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96258503401 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44707267028 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493197278912 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.183670068 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298179579806 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107642663894 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802175345679 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190806364012 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748690650525 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.