Some people think that going to university is the only to achieve success. Others believe that it is better to take vocational courses or going to work early. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people hold the view that the only path leading to the success is entering universities while others think that engaging vocational courses or working early will be more effective. From my perspective, I disagree with the opinion.
It is true that there are various advantages of studying at universities. To begin with, university gives people the chance for a career. In fact, the job market is extremely competitive and skilled employees are high in demand. Degrees are required for a wide range of careers so a university education will give students an advantage in the workforce. Also, university graduates are offered higher pay and greater financial stability. Another reason worth mentioning is that studying at universities helps people broaden professional relationships. To be more specific, universities offers a chance to meet people from many different backgrounds. With establishing good connections which can become future contacts and colleagues makes people feel a sense of happiness. As a result, this influences people’s living attitudes, which makes them more optimistic. This is one of characteristic allowing people get achievements.
Nevertheless, learning vocational courses or working early can help people successful for several reasons. Firstly, vocational courses are short-term training programs that often take less time and money than a degree – people can earn some certificates in couple of months with low cost. These courses can help people develop skill necessary for particular jobs which don’t require too much knowledge from books such as hairstylist, cameraman, photographer, make-up artist. These jobs also bring significant income. Moreover, working early can still lead success. With child prodigies, they absorb the hand-on experiences more quickly so some of them can start the company while they are young and never attend colleges.
In conclusion, for the reasons above, I believe that both university education and vocational courses or going to work early bring success for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66129032258 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.001180829 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4982649425 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3684210526 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2783192119 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759370199694 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786124671293 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195659999666 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703689631496 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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