Some people think that good health is a basic human need and that medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private heath care outweigh the disadvantages?
Whether health care services run by the state or private companies are a debated topic since good health is of paramount importance to everyone. Personally, I would advocate the idea that private firms should be encouraged to operate the health care system because this has more positives than negatives.
One of the disadvantages of private health is that it might cost patients a great deal of money for their health treatment, which put high financial pressure on them, especially the poor. This is particular the case when poor people from rural areas have to sell their valuable properties and farming land to have enough money for their cure at private hospitals.
However, it is my belief that the merits private health companies bring to people are more significant because they provide better services than state-owned health organizations. For instance, a sick person does not have to wait for a long time to be treated at private clinics and hospitals, which help them save a lot of time. This is largely beneficial, particularly for working people who are busy working as they can book their appointment with doctors in advance. Meanwhile, they may take a day off work to queue in a long line at state hospitals since early morning to see doctors.
In addition to that, private health organizations are often well-equipped with top-notch facilities such as more rooms and cutting edge medical equipment. This really helps patients ease their pain and sufferings as they feel more comfortable when they have to spend several days there. While, it is common to see that public hospitals are overloaded where patients do not have enough rooms and medical tools for treatment.
In conclusion, although there are the downsides of private health, I believe that they are outweighed by the upsides. Private health provides better services and medical facilities which are hugely beneficial for patients.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16346153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71008894699 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0819606428 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206699783214 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825640690134 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608779746009 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131580252543 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065256759856 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.