Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies do the advantages of private health care outweight the disadvantages.
Health is a right for every person. Humankind believes that health is a predominant part in people's life and earning profit is unethical way for medical services to take benefit from people who have suffering. I firmly believe that the drawbacks are greater than the positive effects in this issue.
Needless to say, good health care is available to everyone which should be free. Private health care is more likely to be unfair due to the fact that only wealthy people can afford the cost of health services. The most noticeable is that this condition will be a trigger to create social gap as ri...
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- The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(rewrite) 90
- People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 55
- Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however, believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 70
- Some countries have laws that prohibit animals being used in circuses or other forms of entertainment because it is cruel to keep animals in an environment that can cause them stress Should all countries have laws to prevent animals being used in circuses 76
- Today people spend more time travelling to work than before. Some people suggest employers should allow employees to do some works from home. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 87
earning profit is unethical way
earning profit is an unethical way
The most noticeable is that
The most noticeable thing is that
this condition will be a trigger to create social gap
this condition will be a triggered to create a social gap
they will shorter waiting list
they will be shorter on the waiting list
societies will do not same quality of care
societies will not do same quality of care
It also has benefits such as people have their decision to chose secondary service
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even its only contribute small effects
even it only contributes small effects
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