Some people think that good health is very important to every person so medical service should not be run by profit making companies do the advantages of private health care outweight the disadvantages

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Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies do the advantages of private health care outweight the disadvantages.

Health is a right for every person. Humankind believes that health is a predominant part in people's life and earning profit is unethical way for medical services to take benefit from people who have suffering. I firmly believe that the drawbacks are greater than the positive effects in this issue.

Needless to say, good health care is available to everyone which should be free. Private health care is more likely to be unfair due to the fact that only wealthy people can afford the cost of health services. The most noticeable is that this condition will be a trigger to create social gap as ri...

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earning profit is unethical way
earning profit is an unethical way

The most noticeable is that
The most noticeable thing is that

this condition will be a trigger to create social gap
this condition will be a triggered to create a social gap

they will shorter waiting list
they will be shorter on the waiting list

societies will do not same quality of care
societies will not do same quality of care

It also has benefits such as people have their decision to chose secondary service
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even its only contribute small effects
even it only contributes small effects

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