Some people think government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been argued that whether hazardous sports should be prohibited by the government and people hold different views toward this issue. Personally, I believe that prohibition towards dangerous sports should not be implemented
On one hand, people are more likely to get injured or in some sport activities such as boxing, racing and extreme sports. If someone gets injured by participating in dangerous sports, a series of problems will occur alongside with it. For instance, state has to pay the healthcare which would be a financial burden for the government. Furthermore, dangerous sport activities may have negative influence on teenagers. As we know, teenagers are more adventurous, however, plenty of them lack the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, they may intend to imitate behaviors of hazardous sport players in order to be cool, which might cause threats to their safety.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why these sports deserve to exist. To begin with, in fact, all the sports have risks of getting injured. For instance, as for soccer, which is the most popular sport worldwide, also leads to enormous injures each year. It is common for professional soccer players to get hurt during competitions, but no one ever claims that soccer should be banned. With sufficient safeguard procedures, the risks for sports can be effectively reduced. In addition, people have liberty to take part in any sports and activities they enjoy. If someone holds a desire for thrill and adventure, no one can deter him or her from pursuing excitement. Moreover, dangerous sport-lovers are usually more brave and confident in reality, which are essential characters for succeed.
In conclusion, adults should be given the freedom to choose what sport they want, however, governments should impose laws and regulations to forbid juveniles from participating in dangerous sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32343234323 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81363539387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0359910051 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194934451997 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643981278882 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592015851962 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136751265905 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036658426895 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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