Some people think government should ban dangerous sports and some others think it is a freedom to choose the activities we want to.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been argued that whether hazardous sports should be prohibited by the government and people hold different views toward this issue. Personally, I believe that prohibition towards dangerous sports should not be implemented
Admittedly, people are more likely to get injured by participating in dangerous sport activities. Several social problems may occur alongside with the rising amount of injured people. To begin with, governments have to allocate more expenditure to pay for healthcare, which would be a heavy financial burden. Furthermore, violence is common to be seen in some dangerous sports like boxing. These sports tend to send wrong messages to people that it is acceptable to use violence in daily life, this concept would impair social security and stability. Nevertheless, the restriction of dangerous sports cannot eliminate all the risks because dangerous-sports-enthusiasts can still take part in these activities in private.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks for the banning dangerous sports. Firstly, people would feel that their right is being violated if they cannot enjoy the sports that they are passionate about, this might result in resentment to the government. Thus, they are less likely to become responsible citizens. Secondly, dangerous sports industries contribute to the economy. For example, Formula One World Championship earns huge profit from selling sponsorship and broadcasting right each year, plenty of employment positions are created by it. There might be an economic decrease if all hazardous sport industries disappear. In addition, with the development of technology, the risks of dangerous sports have been reduced significantly in recent year. With sufficient safeguard procedures, people can avoid of getting hurt.
In conclusion, prohibiting dangerous sports is unrealistic and impractical to impose, these sports deserve to be exists and people should be given the freedom of choosing whatever sports they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70134228188 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16758082892 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5026315061 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221630888587 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073846037293 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596298526819 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151038690437 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333802242837 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.