Some people think that the Government should decide which subjects ,students should study at university while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer.Disscuss the two views and give your opinion
Many people believe that leaders have full right to decide that in which subject student should resume their higher studies, however other think that pupils must be fully allowed to choose the subject to learn in which they are interested. I will discus both views and give my opinion.
Al most everyone consider that government have to decide what student have to learn in their university life, because it will be more beneficial for them in their future in getting jobs which may be help full for their achievements as well as for their employment carrier also. For example, in 1998 Uk leaders of education has announced that student have to apply in course which government has decide for them according to their marks in previous schooling in results students were more success full and the employment rate was 68.5 which was 2 times higher than before. Governments design can also turn around student's life.
On the other hand, some people are in favour of that student must be free to select subject which they love to study, because it will be more easier for them to learn and to understand properly because learner can pick those subjects in which they comfortable, moreover sometimes students who choose subject under pressure of their parents they are mostly unable to achieve their goals. For example, recent news paper was showing that in 2016-17 Indian has recorded most number of suicide my students of university student's because guardian’s was forcing them to study in engineering not the subject they are favouring to learn. Giving free hand to students can save their life.
To sum up, deciding by government what to learn for students may have some goods, but choosing subject by student will safe their life. In my opinion learner must be allowed to enrol in course they want to study because everyone has their choice what to learn. Learning is fun but if its ur choice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to learn'.
Suggestion: to learn
...inks that education leaders must choose learning courses for learners of university, bec...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... country later after completing studies.For example, my friend sunny is leaving in ...
^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be free in selecting their loved subject for higher studies because it keeps them...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...studies because it keeps them encourage to study and higher chances to get good grades.F...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...y and higher chances to get good grades.For example, my brother who lives in Pakist...
^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enrolled'.
Suggestion: enrolled
...e, my brother who lives in Pakistan has enroll his self in favrate subject due to whic...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'obtains'.
Suggestion: obtains
...self in favrate subject due to which he obtain high markes and also able to get high p...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...right to learn what they want. Choosing subject by own is fun of learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93522267206 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28535248376 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582995951417 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.161497918 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.444444444 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328270084511 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134293230107 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105426863395 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237576860177 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882011790744 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.