some believe that senior citizens above 65 years of age should not be allowed to working . Other believe that should be allowed to work as long as they want. Do you agree or disagree with statement.
Many people think that aged people should not allow to work after crossing age of 65, while others believe that everyone must have choice to work for as long as they want. I am agree that working should not be related to age because it will help people to remain fit and will also enjoy their life. I will discus in details.
Keeping it simple for everyone to work with no age barrier will help them to remain fit, because older people in many countries are getting ill due to restriction to home and not allowing to do work, moreover it also cause issues to them. For example, my grandfather how is 69 years old is selling fruits in market near to our hometown to bring fruit from wholesale market he need to walk around 6 kilometres every day and bring fruit for sale, but when he was restricted to home and was not allowed by my father to work, my grandpa use to ramain unhealthy because of having no exercise in daily life.
Doing different jobs at any age is always helpful in many ways.
In addition, it will also help older people to take fun of their life, because doing job provide them chance to meet new friends around the world with whom they will go to new destinations and enjoy their life and will be able to live more happier. For instance, Justin how’s living in Italy and 78 years old run's his own business on amazon meet new people everyday, he was explaining to me that i meet 45 new people in last 3 months which includes 32 female and 13 male out of those 32 female friends, i went to date with 6 of them, which makes more fun in my life. Doing work at any age is fun.
In conclusion, working should be first priority to remain healthy and also to enjoy life and take more fun of it. In my opinion age must not be barrier for people, who want to do work. Age is just a number for those, who wants to continue working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... to work for as long as they want. I am agree that working should not be related to a...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...to restriction to home and not allowing to do work, moreover it also cause issues to ...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...t allowing to do work, moreover it also cause issues to them. For example, my grandfa...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...joy their life and will be able to live more happier. For instance, Justin how’s living in I...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n how’s living in Italy and 78 years old runs his own business on amazon meet new...
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Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... own business on amazon meet new people everyday, he was explaining to me that i meet 45...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... everyday, he was explaining to me that i meet 45 new people in last 3 months whi...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...13 male out of those 32 female friends, i went to date with 6 of them, which make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24431818182 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12179966836 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.112158729 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274535393831 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120600438293 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095594677049 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165637866594 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107614548068 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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