An active lifestyle generally remains a solid basis for building booming economy of a nation. While i agree that the regime ought to be liable to some aspects of ways of living of public, i also believe that every citizen needs to be entirely responsible for their ways of life. This essay will first discuss the specific roles which have to be performed by the ministry and secondly, the relevant rationales about why the individuals should be the only decision makers for their habits.
To begin with, generally speaking, authorities become instrumental for leading the flourishing lifestyles of ...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Next, without determination, all efforts from the government tend to become fruitless because an undetermined citizen fails to adhere to rules and regulations and get ill severly.
Error: severly Suggestion: severely
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1552 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.352 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.802 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.819 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.594 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ding booming economy of a nation. While i agree that the regime ought to be liabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48965517241 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88020840837 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665517241379 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2719568506 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.727272727 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145983187394 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049372818531 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535758912617 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707283620073 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482078989171 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.