Some people think that government should invest money in art and culture events, while other believe that government should spend money more on other important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Money is the worst discovery of human life but, it is the most trusted material to trust human nature. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that should the governance utilize money in art and cultural events as compare to other important things or not? Thought this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that bureaucracy should invest money in the field of art and cultural events. They strengthen their view point by claiming that both these events play highly crucial role in human life. These events provide great assistance to conserve the culture of nation. A good illustration of this is existence of 'hawali' in most popular city which is situated in North side of India named 'Amritsar.' Here, all things related to the culture were exhibit that reflects the culture andcustomer of 'PUNJAB.' Therefore, I have to say that government should spend money on such kind of activities. Moreover, there are art events which were organized by plethora of authorities. Art exhibition help to improve imagination power of an individual especially, in children. Beside it, it is also essential to preseve species which were extinct in the form of sketch.'Ginko biloba' an extinct species of Flora would be the perfect epitome
On contrary side, there is an opposing group of people who believe that money should be invested by the government on other essential things such as, improving infrastructure of schools and construction of roads. To make their arguments convincing they claim that as we know,' children are the future of nation.' Therefore, government put more efforts to make them literate person but, it is only possible if governance provide adequate facilities for instance, good infrastructure, well equipped labs and many more facilities. So, students acquire permanent knowledge and first hand experience. As a result, obstacle related to the illetracy become overcome which leads to the development of nation. Moreover, construction and repairing of roads helps to eradicate the problem of road accident.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I reckon that there is no single conclusion still, I make this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Therefore, according to my opinion, nodoubt, art and cultural events are as important as other things but, the government should spend money on all these activities and other important things by maintaining a balance between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...Here, all things related to the culture were exhibit that reflects the culture andcu...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exhibited'.
Suggestion: exhibited
... all things related to the culture were exhibit that reflects the culture andcustomer o...
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Line 3, column 893, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ginko
...hich were extinct in the form of sketch.Ginko biloba an extinct species of Flora woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, i reckon, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19294117647 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81277363144 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531764705882 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7094583489 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.35 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33862441413 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845378634886 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10471757517 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209796437806 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388963661878 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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