Now days, Fresh Water has tuned in to the limited resources for human beings in recent year even those it is necessary for each and every people to realized the important of the water. However, some group of people opine that government authority dearly manage purveyance of the potable water. While other believes that use the fresh water without any hesitation. Meanwhile the aforementioned argument with the relevant reasons, but also represent final opinion in the subsequence paragraph.
To commence with, Althous, there are manifold of factors why authority should dearly control the supply of fresh water, But, The predominate one might be increase the population. To illustrate, first and for most now day population are increased Althous, demand of filter water increase as a impact most of the ruler area do not reach the sufficient amount of the water because of the lake of purified water resources. government should take care of the that kind of thing and applied some rule for the uses of the water in urban area. Moreover, Most of the people use filter water to uncertain things such as cleaning the house, bike cling, footpath washing around the house so many thing as impact some people to survey the lake of the resource. for instance, it is clearly demonstrate by time of India article which revel that in 25% of water used in industrial work and 25% of water waste for the cleaning the house and so many other things as impact some part of country people survive natural resources. Thus, government should apply some strict rules and regulation for the uses of the fresh water.
Moving to the flip side, some people do not think about the natural resources and use the the without any hesitation and west of the water. but now a days, some environment issue such as climate weather changes its cause behind the shortage of the fresh water in some area. additionally government should some step to purified and reuse the west of the water and full filed the shortage of the water need.
In the conclusion, I tend to reiterate from above discuss that it fresh water should control by the government so that they can provide the another poor nation as well as awareness about the importance of the water .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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...reness about the importance of the water .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84816753927 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46199285761 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7218401472 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37416505549 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151037636902 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622122403016 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240404098114 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194357730011 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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