It is Irrefutably, adolescent can pass through different stages of life. There are spilt of option regarding to make joyful life in teenager time and adults have more responsibility regarding carrier family and so on. Some people opine that adulthood is joyful time for the most of people lives. While, Another people believe that adult have more responsibility toward Her families and future career. However, The following essay will not only analyses aforementioned argument with relevant reason But, Also represent final opinion in the further coming paragraph.
To Commence with, Although there ae manifold of factor why adulthood are the most happiest, But, The Most significant one is less responsibility . To elaborate, The life of teenager is without responsibility, they enjoy without worrying about the future as they live in the moment and also they didn't have any liability to her career and bright future. Additionally, Teenager have friend they can plane any time for the picnic and outing as per the adult had make some management regarding planning but youngster directly tack the mini vacation without any tension. for instance, if the friend randomly plan to go for picnic and outing without second thought they go with them just only take the permission on his parents. There do not have any serious responsibility regarding family and work out they enjoy her life themselves.
Furthermore, The another significant reason is depended life. To illustrate, The Most of youngster ages between 12 to 20 there are depends on her parents. Meanwhile, They have Study in Collages and School and demands expensive electronic device such as Mobile phone , Laptop , and another devices . they didn't have any such requirement just for only show up they demand high quality of things. wishing are granted and there demands are fulfil by parents. some time parents fulfil her demands they have negative impact of children growth they have negative effect on his life such as they can do smoking drinking , play with cards and etc. For Examination, The survey of oxped university 75% of adulthood are smoking and drinking in most of the country just because of parent are give high pocket money and fulfill the demands her teenager.
Moving to the flip side ,according to letter view the most of the adults are happiest because of they have freedom of choice, whatever they can do while, they have responsibility for batter future and career. they have also spend money on his business and earn more many and also they have more future planning regarding his her life. Nevertheless, They have face many situation in his life . and also they can become parents, husbands / wife, grandparents this thing also gave him happiness in his life Althaus they have rides to make decision on his family and handling of his family.
In conclusion , i tent to reiterate that everything its own significance, nothing can not be ignore Althaus, Teenager have responsibility on his life nd career they are more dependent on his parent while adult are more responsibility toward her family and career and they have face the various stages of his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2628.0 1615.20841683 163% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68721807064 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 853.2 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3570656564 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151783591158 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590817184966 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552657148445 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112266296707 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644511112653 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.