some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that money could be better spent in elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view
In today's world some societies assume that city's project are more substantial to be funded than arts. Although arts galleries need to be conserved, i perceive that the governments should most spend its budget for city developments.
To commence with, perhaps the major reasons of this issue is enhancement of health care. Lack of advanced medical technology is often met in many hospitals in which poor people live. When they need operations in hospital, they are often moved to another hospital as the facilities are incomplete. As the consequence, many patients cannot be cured or helped fully due to shortage facility. due to the fact that the governments should spend their budget to fulfill needed equipments in hospitals. The governments also fund public transportation developments by establishing integrated system in transportation. To illustrate, they build lane of trains and buses between countryside and central city. it will make easy access for doing business by people living in suburbs such as selling their local goods to the city. As a result this will affect economical condition and quality life.
Looking another perspective, it is true that public arts reflect and recall society to the lives of our ancestors, historical artifacts and paintings, so the government budget-based funding is essential. However, nowadays some art galleries can earn investment from sponsorships and catered events. it means that they can create their own money without obtaining government funding.
To conclude, despite the fact that to maintain and conserve the existence of public arts are nation's obligation, i tend to agree that fundings should be allocated to city's projects rather than arts if the governments have surplus.
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- Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas Why is this What problems does this cause 61
- Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas Why is this What problems does this cause 61
- some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that money could be better spent in elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view 67
- Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas Why is this What problems does this cause 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42279411765 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93368300931 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0190655408 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176847290913 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509779183291 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318210239583 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104752470576 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108635180614 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.