Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Arts work is considered one of the most important ancient treasures in the world. The artwork has become popular for several decades, and there has been the rapid growth of the number of people who become an artist and produce their artworks. I totally agree that the government should be spent this money elsewhere.
One advantage of spending money elsewhere is that the government could allocate its budget to donate to other things, some of which include charity. There are many charities that are lack of money and opportunity to facilitate children, so it would be great if the government embrace those charities for considering to help encourage. For example, in Thailand, there are many children who do not currently possess the ability to study especially the best brains of the world, it would be regrettable if these children cannot have an education because of low financial. Therefore, if the government allocates its budget from the arts to donate to charity for education, lots of children will have a valuable opportunity to study.
Another advantage of spending money elsewhere is that the government can also manage the money to invest with other things for the country such as the economy. The economy is one of the most essential things that can decide whether that country is wealthy and prosper or not, so if the government put the economy to the initial priority, that country could be more beneficial. To clarify, investing money in the economy could terminate wasting money on the arts because the government has to utilize lots of money to invest.
In conclusion, spending money elsewhere can facilitate citizens to become healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1204379562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67283881764 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514598540146 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.261793978 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289906314217 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121289736448 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116879340625 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158978131421 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639168146201 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.