While it is believed that harmful sports should be banned by the authorities, some still think that it brings competitiveness and pleasure. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why these two groups have different opinions towards this kind sports and give my opinion at the end.
On the one side, those who go against life threatening games and wish for ban by the authorities, fear for human lives. In other words, these sports expose people's lives to danger. For example, when a parachute fails to open during sky diving, the result will be sad. Another reason is that, these supporters believe that children will imitate these activities and put themselves at risk of injury or death. Therefore, they feel the only guarantee to safety is prohibiting dangerous sports.
On the other hand, some believe dangerous sports should be allowed since they are a form of employment to many people and I agree with them. Over the years, giant international companies have been pouring huge sums of money into these sports, hence creating jobs for many. For example, boxing has got great sponsorship from corporate world and the players earn attractive salaries. In addition, the advocates of life threatening games trust that if safety measures and guidelines are put into place and strictly enforced, the risks will surely be eliminated.
In conclusion, although there are different views to whether dangerous sports should be deemed illegal or not, I personally accept that they should be allowed but with saftey measures and guidelines in place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12992125984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60470786635 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0871533314 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.583333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217583464754 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771071467278 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743784041055 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137505415144 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644240960113 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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