Some people opine that scholara should not be given homework bu teachers,whilst others believe that it plays an essential part in tje education of children.This essay will tackle both views though i am strongly of the opinion that homework is important.
To begin witn homework is a vital tool in childrens education in that it enhances continuity of a days work from school,home and the next lesson.. Also it allows revision of work done at school later at home that is keeping the mind refreshed.Moreso parents have the opportunity to be kept abreast and continuosly be part of the childs work by assisting where necessary.Childrens minds are kept focused on school activities hence mischevious thoughts are lessened .Giving school children homework also cultivates a reading culture thereby reducing or diminishing laziness in them.Finally some form of independence is instilled in children,as they are able to do school with less or even no supervision.
On the other hand,homework can exert a lot of pressure on both school children and parents.After a long day at school the mind requires rest,yet with homework it continues to be functional hence causing unnecessary pressure leading to strezs.Homework leaves no time to rest nor to refresh.To add on as mush as it is encouraged to give school children homework ,it does not paint a true reflection of the childs ability.This is so as in most cases parents and the use of internet assists in the research for homeworks.
In conclusion, although others believe that homework is a stressor .I think it is the best method to keep scholars in a learning mode even if off school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07777777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21380125685 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.959204338 49.4020404114 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 274.2 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6 7.06120827912 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375614631708 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20895669285 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103315566417 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233230106986 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106253443049 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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