Some people think that governments should give financial support
to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe
that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that authorities should provide an ancillary aid to creative artists in terms of finance. Others hold the conservative view that they should pool money from alternative resources. In this essay , I shall put forth sides of an argument.
On the one hand , art is the backbone of every society. It is the preeminent tool of educating as well as informing youth about past cultures. In addition, art enlarges the scope of imagination in youth , in crude terms, shapes healthy view among youngsters about the wealth of culture which inherited by their great ancestors . So, in order to grow up youngsters with appropriate view and eschew from monotonous life , governments should investigate creative artists as much as possible.
On the other hand, some people think that there are other outstripped sectors that needs to be supported as well. For some states which was in the high incidence of illiteracy , redundancy and downturn , it is more pliable to iron out and grapple with these problems first rather than making a frantic attempt to the work of artists. Admittedly, spurring to fund art would be beneath for these countries which are embattled with morr important issues than promoting culture. Therefore, some people nurse a grievance against to this idea robustly.
In conclusion , I reckon that government should not pack in supporting art , rather should promote the work of creative artists combining with the coordination of alternative sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21008403361 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81321463754 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8590237224 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273385121191 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090463194959 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893879561928 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167807438429 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607560769234 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.