Some people think that governments should invest more in public services instead of wasting money on arts such as music and paintings.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that governments has no such planning for investment. Some individuals are of the opinion that government has good in providing public services whereas others opine that they are not. It is necessary to look at both arguments before forming an opinion. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the reason.
In my opinion, government should have more focuses on providing better services to their citizens which are not seeing in many places. Moreover, government has invested mammoth money for advertising their schemes what they did and what they will do rather than increase public services like public transportation, public security, education etc. People depends on government services which affects their daily life, their daily routines. For example, a person who is going to office, five days in a week, have fixed timing but because of delay in bus or local train will affect to reaching on time and because of that sometime his/her managers shouted on him.
On the other hand, other than public services lots of things which also government has to do for development perspective. There is no issue to investing money on arts like music, painting, gardening. Without any doubt, these things are also played a vital role for increasing economy of our county. People all over the world, has come in our country for investing money on different type of arts like in making movies which helps to improve our economy.
In conclusion, public services and arts both are necessary for the country development and for that government has to invest on them. But providing best services to their people has always first priority of the government and investing more money for that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68158811407 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551971326165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5875369202 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272969362021 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102917169514 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694649874284 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173072124769 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042246209335 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.