Some people think that governments should provide Internet access at no charge. Others, however, argue that people should pay for this service. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the technological era, the majority of people have a thought that the supreme authorities had better let their citizens access to the internet without spending cash. However, some people have a contrast view that inhabitants should pay for this service. This essay will scrutinize both views before arriving a personal perspective.
On the other hand, it is understandable why numerous people think that the government should provide free internet use on account of the following reasons. To begin with, contemporary devices are available in almost every region around the world and enable humans to access essential information and catch up with the development of society. For instance, people who work in stock market need to catch up with the consistent fluctuation of the currency, so they must connect constantly to the internet to utilize their technological gadgets and make a wise decision to avoid risk of economic crisis. Moreover, free internet access can stimulate economic growth by bolstering imaginative ability and entrepreneurship among the population. Those are the reasons why supreme authorities should allow all residents to access the internet without paying regardless of their social class.
On the other hand, paying money to use internet services is likely to be an efficient method to develop the financial status of a country. First, the cash paid to use internet services by residents will be gathered to use for distinctive purposes or allocated to different fields to develop the economy. For example, the government in my region utilize money paid to use internet to organize several campaigns of subsiding for people in difficult circumstances, which creates a positive effect on reducing wealth inequality in the country. Furthermore, it also provides consumers better service and internet security which will prevent human from several risky repercussions such as losing personal information or being threatened by internet crime.
In conclusion, I believe the government should assist retirees with money and take care of them, but it is each retiree that needs to save certain amounts of money to stay financially independent
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43786982249 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94288737704 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.99171529 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30585903857 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11120638447 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803836614528 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171062488469 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777567916622 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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