Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?
Technology advancement/advent has a great impact on every aspect of life. Many people believe that top-notch technology can dramatically reduce the crime rate. However, my viewpoint is that high-end technology can otherwise be adopted by criminals for committing sophisticated criminal cases.
Cyber crime is increasing significantly, which has been considered as one of the most dangerous types of crime in the 21st century. Offenders usually exploit the vulnerability of security systems to steal confidential documents or personal information for illegal purposes. Take a case of a famous Vietnamese singer as an example, the security cameras installed in her house were cracked and controlled by a group of hackers. They leaked all her personal photos online to tarnish her reputation. It is undeniable that there are many information leakage cases occurring all over the world, but the effort for preventing this crime is getting pointless.
Furthermore, cutting-edge technologies might make conventional crimes such as trafficking, money laundering or murder more complex. Dangerous criminals will use innovative technologies to serve their criminal acts. For example, in one criminal case, the traffickers cracked into the GPS system to mislead the police while they are tracking them. Similarly, a serial murderer livestreamed his crime scenes to draw public attention so that the police might be distracted by the press and the crowd. Hence, it is agreed that high-tech tools were ineffective in controlling crimes worldwide.
In conclusion, crime rate is elevating despite the development of technology, thus, governing bodies should work for paramount causes of crime rather than relying on technology to control criminal commitments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70881226054 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18699796121 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662835249042 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9299165756 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218475678949 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705002570082 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067597048446 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134955643027 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754775403982 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.