Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There is a view that, conducting sports on a global level is beneficial for the country. While some people argue that this is not good, I agree with those who argue that such an approach is valuable.
Looking firstly at the negatives, not all countries have the financial ability to host sports events and also invest huge sums of money without the guarantee of returns. This is because, organizing events means countires should build infrastructure and arenas and be in a state to cater the participants coming from other parts of the world with accommodation, food and other resources which would require significant funds. These funds could be used for other fundamental uses in the country such as healthcare and education which incur prosperity of the country.
However, I believe that international sports events galvanize athletes into performing better. They also serve as a source of education . Moreover, they afford multiple opportunities and provide greater exposure to the athletes and in case an athlete wins the competition this would earn a good name for their country bringing recognition and honor. Moreover, such events could engender new jobs oppurtunities and employ people in jobs such as trainers, program managers and many more. In addition, countries can open tourists visas for sports lovers. This, in turn, would generate great revenue and boost the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, as for, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26576576577 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76469673388 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5931372152 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233070573237 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757574353357 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534539105403 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157830764076 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585688959669 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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