Some people think that hosting international sports events is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
While some individuals hold the view that organizing worldwide competitions is beneficial for the nation, others disagree. Personally, I agree that there are more benefits than drawbacks to having global athletic events.
On the one hand, there are numerous rewards of hosting a global sports event. Boosting tourism is the first benefit a country can receive when holding an international sporting event. That is because hosting a major international sporting event can attract a large number of visitors from all over the world, which can promote the local tourism industry and generate significant economic revenue. Reducing the nation's rate of joblessness is the second advantage. It means that hosting a big athletic event may result in a significant increase in employment across a range of industries, including construction, hotel, transportation, and security. Promoting global ties is the last benefit. More specifically, organizing an essential worldwide sports event may unite fans in various sports from all over the world. This might encourage global collaboration and understanding.
On the other hand, organizing an international sports competition also causes a lot of harm to a country. First of all, the country hosting the event will suffer environmental damage. That is because holding a global sporting event can have a negative impact on the environment, due to the construction of new infrastructure, the generation of waste, and the increased transportation emissions. The second harmful effect is that organizing an international sporting event requires high costs. That is because organizing a major international sporting event can be very expensive, requiring significant investments in infrastructure, security, and other areas and this can be a financial burden for the host country, especially if it is a developing country.
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of hosting international sporting events outweigh the disadvantages. However, it is important for host countries to carefully consider the costs and benefits before making a decision. It is also important to ensure that the events are well-organized and that measures are taken to mitigate any potential negative impacts.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...re numerous rewards of hosting a global sports event. Boosting tourism is the first be...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nternational sporting event can attract a large number of visitors from all over the world, which...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 745, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ally, organizing an essential worldwide sports event may unite fans in various sports ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63095238095 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29759218658 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5376419999 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206417699321 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709435917288 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501683748935 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132696116607 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111857838519 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...re numerous rewards of hosting a global sports event. Boosting tourism is the first be...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nternational sporting event can attract a large number of visitors from all over the world, which...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 745, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ally, organizing an essential worldwide sports event may unite fans in various sports ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63095238095 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29759218658 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5376419999 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206417699321 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709435917288 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501683748935 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132696116607 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111857838519 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.