Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for a country, while some think it is bad.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
While some people believe that being the host of a worldwide international sports event may bring advantages to the country, others argue that it could have negative effects on that nation. Both sides of this argument will be discussed in the essay below, and my opinion is drawn in the end.
On the one hand, there are some reasons people hold a belief that hosting an event related to sports in the world is advantageous. It can be seen that when an international sports event takes place in one certain country, it would have some positive impacts on the economic situation of that country. Specifically, because of the importance and the necessity of a worldwide sports festival, there may be a significant increase in the number of tourists traveling to the host country to view the competitions in sports in which they are interested. That also leads to the benefits in employment opportunities for citizens living in that region.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that it is negative when an international sports festival is held in a country, especially a developing one. For that one, it is not easy to invest a great amount of money to prepare for the upcoming event owing to their fluctuating financial economy while they could not have any benefits after that. This will possibly result in economic hardship occurring in that developing country and it may take many times to solve that struggle.
In conclusion, while it is true that being the host of an international sports event may be great for one country, I strongly think that it may exert some negative effects additionally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...g the host of a worldwide international sports event may bring advantages to the count...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rtance and the necessity of a worldwide sports festival, there may be a significant in...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86446886447 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80124717529 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1389850359 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344631360578 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131952048871 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813374571924 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222196350472 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627340919489 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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