In this modern world, nobody likes to remember the historical events and ancestors knowledge . Many people think that the people learned everything from their own experiences that happened in their life. Others counter argue this as neglecting the success of the past generation as well as their focusing only on the present innovations.
To begin with, from the beginning of the human life the learn new things and now we stand in a most digitised world . Human got knowledge from the unfortunate incidences that happenend in their life. For example ,people start to are cooked food only after the forest fire. They tasted the burned meat and vegetables while they are recognised that the cooked food had tastier than the raw food. Furtermore , the ancestors used some symbols and sounds to communicate with each other. Then they modified it into words and now we use this words to communicate
However, nowadays most of the people forgot the efforts that had been taken by the past generation. Even though, their innovations were by the ignorance, it is unavoidable that these knowledge also used for the revolution of the world. The base of today's innovations are from the information that were gathered by the fast generation. Fire is the best example for it . The older generation identify that by scrubbing two stones or metals will make the fire , which knowledge is also used in nowadays even though some modifications are done. Moreover ,most of the scientific technologies such as vehicles ,machines ,as well as food items are created on the basis of the ancestors knowledge. Therefore we I cannot ignore their role in today's world.
To conclude ,every knowledge is a result of unpredicted incidents or situations that happenend in the life. The people have the ability to think or having an investigative mind found the scientific reasons and modified into various useful technologies. Therefore in my opinion , never forget the past cultures and customs even in this digitalised world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08231707317 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73300819383 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5140341699 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167714762725 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501546799923 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340840887395 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104954765307 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307784153792 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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