Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree?
Each and every living-being, doubtlessly, requires a favourable habitat for their existence: but, ungracious activities of human towards the nature deteriorate possibility of survival of other creatures for a great extent. So, the over exploitation of forests and other terrains for housing, farmland and so on, without any doubt, has led many a specie on the verge of extinction which is disagreeable at any aspect.
Since its inception of industrialization, it has to admit that the rate of deforestation has scaled its summit ; and this insalubrious human activity had affected the environmental equilibrium tremendously which ultimately affected the life of wildlife adversely. It is possible to identify this trend if a meticulous research carried out on the number of species which were already extinct from earth's surface and how many other species are on their way to the graveyard.
If no remedial measures have taken to arrest this phenomenon, then the world without life will be a reality in near future. So, it is predominant to save and render more area for flora and fauna to cherish their life in a most favourable habitat. To attain this goal, stringent rules from concerned authorities and absolute co-operation from every human being is inevitable. But, before this, a policy with equal priorities for economy and ecology should introduce, otherwise economy shall dominate ecology which might lead to a disaster.
Therefore, it is essential to retain land for other animals for their harmonious life, because they all have the same right, as human, on earth to live. So, developing policies which should not disturb balance of natural habitat is the best way to counteract this predicament. I hope, in future, such positive human efforts may bring harmony to eco-system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 286, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...to counteract this predicament. I hope, in future, such positive human efforts may bring ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3041958042 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00738245141 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9882377034 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143479986015 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547460772318 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530154972692 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891372372262 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470417420042 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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