some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, there is an intense argument over the issue that illegal internet downloads causing negative effect on music industry. Some people are in the favours of this, however rest averse it. The content of this essay is discussing both of the perspective, and the supporting points of both people thinking will be discussed in the subsequent paragraph.
firstly, according to the some set of people, illegal internet downloads is stumbling blocks to the music industry, a definitely it is. As everyone knows in whole world there is not a single field of industry where we grow or make a future without investing our own money. In music industry also there are lot of expenditure like making music, hiring a video director for music video and so on. By looking into all those expenses which music industry invest, for sure illegal downloading creating loop holes in the way of music industry. Although, money has major role in music industry so, illegal downloading making losses to the industry in the sector of income. for example: - In India and also in other countries copyright infringement of movie or any music video by any person who found guilty face the penalties of 5 years jail or fine or charge up to lakhs of rupees. All in all, i believe if the government also mention the act of copyright infringement as a crime then definitely it has negative effect on the music industry.
On the other side, some people believe copyright infringement doesn't have any major impact on artist. somehow is it true, also but not in every situation because some artist whom are mainly focusing on fame not for money, they don't have any problem for illegal downloading, for the reason that if people get to hear the music in free of cost by illegal downloading then definitely more people know about the artist and he or she easily gets viral. for example, nowadays some artists leak their own music videos and make that viral which called digital marketing, they only do this for getting famous and create the goodwill of their names in music industry.
In conclusion, as we see copyright infringement of music are act of crime in every country. So, definitely it will not good to commit crime in any kind of way. Also, illegal downloading creating losses of income to music industry. So, definitely it has negative impact on artist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74937965261 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5214630156 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45905707196 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 403.0 20.2975951904 1985% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1914.0 106.682146367 1794% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 403.0 20.7667163134 1941% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 91.0 7.06120827912 1289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34151896427 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.34151896427 0.084324248473 405% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217659987738 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518744441342 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 202.4 13.0946893788 1546% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -337.57 50.2224549098 -672% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 160.5 11.3001002004 1420% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.37 8.58950901804 307% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 163.2 10.1190380762 1613% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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