Some people think that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive developments. Others say it can cause the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Interconnection between other nation in terms of enterprise, trades and even in celebrations has been escalating recently. Some people argued that, which may inhibit countries local culture unconditionally, while others oppose because, they believe such relation would enhance national development in many ways. However, in my opinion, world wide co relation would flourish each countries social progress and individual acknowledgement.
On the one hand, a nations growth is always depends on import and export business, and artistic congregation. Mainly, agricultural crops and engineering works are main commercial product to connect with other countries. For instance, national summit, and contract between different countries in terms of business agenda would help many developing countries growth by the support of other developed countries.Moreover, exchange ideas about arts and literature may enhance the unknowing factors about other country such as Shakespeare drama given significant impression in many European and other countries arts.
Someone oppose such development because, they often believe that, commercial exchange may decline our local growth. The main reason behind that, qualified product would export to other nations and law quality remaining substance has to be spreads locally. For example, legislation over imported product must be pass through quality check up and there by get license to supply. In addition, every nation has the local identity in terms of celebrations and festivals. Mixed up arts and other literal works may subside the reality and purity by many diversities.
Nevertheless, in my view that, people would be open up their mind to enlarge the business connection and ethnic relation to other countries which would lead to financial growth by exchanging money and travel tourism and so on. Furthermore, proper knowledge regarding other countries nurturing ability would be able to correct the mistakes and to produce more useful and versatile product and works.
To conclude, joining various nations by business trades or raising arts would indispensable for every countries development rather than the negative outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80373831776 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95266960239 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5152370082 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.071428571 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180311673405 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619151386273 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500787586713 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108563663373 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427987264214 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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