In this contemporary society, it is a common belief that globalization between nations is beneficial. Nevertheless, the others are opposed to this idea, claiming that cultural values of many countries can be lost. From my point of view, this trend would create certain merits but there will also be some demerits and I will discuss both of these views in my essay.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects that globalization brings to society. To begin with, one major advantage of this development is that it can facilitate global commerce, which takes advantage of economic powerhouse and economically disadvantaged countries. Hence, increasing the potential for economic development. Additionally, another point worth pointing out is that there will be more lucrative opportunities for every country to bridge cultural gaps and ease hostility. For instance, countries can receive other countries' differences such as lifestyle, cuisine and language. As a result, this can promote robust relations and prevent trade wars between each country.
On the other hand, in spite of the above mentioned benefits, the rise in business and cultural contact also generates many downsides that should be taken into account. Initially, in this modernizing society, many people would have the propensity for following the latest trend and turning away from their national values and they believe that it is sometimes old-fashioned. Consequently, this trend can lead to the loss of culture and tradition. On top of that, this not only triggers high competition but also creates interdependence between nations, resulting in a rapid increase of the gap between rich and poor.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that the prevalence of globalization is the result of the development of the society and this trend could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, for instance, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49163879599 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05908746681 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4670797751 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180103720998 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675146633175 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336089246976 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107135137948 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542025523556 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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