Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that people may lose the ability to communicate face to face because of continuous use of mobile phones and computers.In my opinion,in creasing use of electronic devices as a way to interact with others will have a negative impact on people's face-to-face communication skills.
On the one hand,these electronic devices bring us various benefits.Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters and telegrams.Nowadays,interactions by email,phone and video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings,and many of us benefits from these interactions,either in work or social contexts.For example,many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face
On the other hand,our ability to communicate may be affected if we heavily rely on these modern technologies to interact with others,because interaction by using electronic devices is a poor substitute to real communication.Words and letters are the only source of information when looking at screens,so if a person interact with others for a long period,he or she may fail to recognize the information behind others' expressions and intonations.Furthermore,the availability of new communication technologies can have a result of isolating people and discourage real interaction.For example,many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in real world.
In conclusion,communication technologies make the interaction with others more convenient than ever before,but our social skills may also affected in a negative way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86956521739 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23250585692 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 487.493589701 49.4020404114 987% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 495.0 106.682146367 464% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.3333333333 20.7667163134 406% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.3333333333 7.06120827912 486% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291593250019 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21066602779 0.084324248473 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155009172172 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187276736388 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140413621969 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 13.0946893788 370% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.16 50.2224549098 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.1 7.44779559118 297% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.95 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.98 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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