Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To begin with, in the modern age there are quite an extensive diversity of the air pollution. 'some' people think that international car free days are an extensive way of decrease the quantity of air pollution. Presenting my view there are other ways of reducing the amount of air pollution. I would intend to explore my view in upcoming paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that what should do to reduce the amount of air pollution. The first and foremost cause could be that in the factories burnt the coal,diesel and thousand tonnes of air polluted by unburnt carbon dioxide release in the atmosphere which is the main reason for air pollution. Moreover, in the Thermopower plant and in the nuclear power plant heat is produced by the burnt of coal. As well as subsequent factor fector could be there is common belief large quantity of air is being polluted by in agriculture field from the wastage of crop. For instance, the recent survey findings have clearly indicated that 20 percent air is polluted by the farmers.
However, a number of definite actions could be take to mitigate of solar system and wind power is the free source of energy and non polluted. 'The' government should be make the rules by using the solar power and rules must be followed by the people. As a consequence it is most successful way to reduce the amount of air pollution. Solar cars are make by some companies but never launched. So solar cars must be launched by the help of government. People are more likely to drive this car. This must be because of it is free source of energy and never produced any kind of noise in the car.
To conclusion, although there are good reason for air pollution. But I'm opinion solar power and wind power is better source of energy and control the air pollution. After that our environment can be fully developed and people's health could be on cloud nine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84012539185 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53473816282 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476489028213 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8649159797 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280397880792 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972600227475 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114500602582 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186373421747 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147514187958 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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