Some people think that international collaboration is necessary to solve the problem of terrorism. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
It is undeniable that recent terror attacks raise the spectre of causing the panic deaths inside the peaceful habitat. By dint of that, the initiative, in which all international subjects tend to be active in collaboration with others for the sake of tackling against terrorism, should be deemed justifiable. To my mind, i am totally on favour of it.
To begin with, every nation's resources are finite including being spent on dealing with terror threats. The inter-sharing cooperation, subsequently, is expected to be an ideal catalyst in total action against such hazard. To specify this practice, countries or concerned subjects probably share the intelligence information to spot and hinder the terror schemes effectively. In the arena of counterterrorism, in addition, the international collaboration is the obvious sign of universal consensus with the purpose of such issue is not a single attempt of each country.
A network of counterterrorism alliances can ink the agreement to resolve the problem comprehensively, which will not be done by a solo attempt. To be more specific, terrorists. to who are forced unconsciously to become, are not unfeeling on murdering people by nature. Take french islamist followers for instance, they are discriminated and not given chance in comparison with other religions ones. As a result, such people turn to be extremists who dare to kill someone. Hence, an international attempts probably create more fair opportunities for those such as more eduacation systems, a growing of occupation vacancies and so on.
To sum up, terrorism somehow is a mistaken phenomenon of human society but, an international cooperation can solve this to better world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244147157191 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.160535117057 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103678929766 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0468227424749 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0133779264214 0.0437548338989 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127090301003 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0501672240803 0.0403226058552 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.32725244804 2.80594681477 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0468227424749 0.0326793684256 143% => OK
Particles: 0.00334448160535 0.00163938923432 204% => OK
Determiners: 0.100334448161 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133779264214 0.021408717616 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133779264214 0.011925033212 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1698.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.38345864662 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417293233083 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327067669173 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240601503759 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176691729323 0.137316102897 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32725244804 2.80594681477 119% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.56093040696 115% => OK
Word variations: 74.2597485239 60.7387585426 122% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0644369401 49.517814964 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.7067669173 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.90909090909 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354110810322 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0917596996087 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0661469585833 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.511768869892 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180128983932 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129729793658 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591489084697 0.0742795772207 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307587250695 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11865275474 0.0638462369009 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234265462613 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397240676041 0.058150111329 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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