In a contemporary time, people have different views about living in a vertical city. While living at a city with several tall buildings has some disadvantages, I would argue that there are more advantages.
On the one hand, a vertical city has some certain disadvantages. Firstly, high-rise apartments limit green space that supplies fresh air and helps people relax after a long day of work. So, this makes them more stressed out. Secondly, living in a tall building can be unsafe in some cases, For example, when a fire is occurring, people who live inside cannot exit in a fastest way. This is because they have to take the stairs instead of using lifts and if they cannot go out as quick as possible, they will die.
On the other hand, a vertical city has more clear advantages than the drawbacks. With a population explosion, one strength is that a huge number of people can live in a same space. To clarify, tall buildings include not only residential areas but also medical, educational and governmental facilities. Also, people living there can work, eat and shop in the same building. Further more,a long distance travelling to the workplace is shortened within walking distance. This contributes to curb traffic jam in rush hours and air pollution. Another benefit is that people who live in multifunctional buildings can avoid the risks of using private vehicles such as car accidents as well as reduce the demand of using fuel for transports.
In conclusion, although I recognize that the negative effects of living at a vertical city, it seems to me that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
- Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 93
- Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82184385964 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2334299916 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203861929444 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711141363783 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662635395602 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141301911417 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632745592768 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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