Some people think the technology makes life complex, so we should make the life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that if we do not use technology in daily life, our lives will not be complex. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this idea due to three main reasons that I will explore in this essay.
Firstly, computer technology can enhance the productivity of a society. For example, by using robots, the number of manual workers are decreased along with wages expense. Likewise, automation is more and more popular in using the assembly line that millions of people are set free from arduous works in factories. As a results, manufacturers can save time and the quality of products are also improved rapidly.
Secondly, with the widespread of using Internet, people can gain more assess to information than ever before. Take reading books for instance, e-books become a favorite choice among readers because they can read anytime instead of consuming time to look up books at libraries. Moreover,the development of email and mobile phone enable people keep in touch with their partners in business or friends more quickly and effectively in comparison to the out-of-date ways such as handwritten letters.
Finally, in terms of environmental problems, online news helps people stay informed about what is happening in the world, especially global warming situations. This means that people have more information about environmental issue and their awareness of this problem can be raised. As a consequences, an increasingly number of youngsters concern about environmental problems and join with non-profit organizations around the word in protecting as well as conserving green environment.
In conclusion, as reasons mentioned above, I believe that the development of technology has only beneficial effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a result; results
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
...eness of this problem can be raised. As a consequences, an increasingly number of youngsters c...
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Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('number') instead of another adjective.
...oblem can be raised. As a consequences, an increasingly number of youngsters concern about environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46296296296 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01242283852 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5366096453 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3846153846 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124481486095 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458687663169 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676767609768 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069139037455 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593620928276 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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