Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The benefits of living in a horizontal city and a vertical city has been a heated topic of debate in the today's world, While it is often belived that living in a vertical city is better, I am of the opinion that the horizontal city would be the best choice.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why i agree that a vertical city brings lots of advantages. Cities nowadays seem to be quite over-populated. The great population means that more and more land needed to build houses and other buildings, Living in high buildings would save the land for other purposes, such as for public usage. Thanks to high building, the price of accomodation would be reduced, too. In addition, living higher is enable people to breath fresher air, compared with the polluted air at lower ground.
On the other hand, there are more compelling reasons why I firmly believe that it is best to live in a horizontal city. It is safer when emergencies occur in lower buildings. For example, in the fire, escaping from a private house would be easier than from the skycraper. Morever, people living in high building usually have to pay a great amount of money for many services, such as maintenance service and building service. This spending would decrese when living in a private house so that people can have more money to do more important things like pursuing higher education.
In conclusion, although I concede that living in a vertical city is beneficial, I am firmly convinced that living in a horizontal city would be the best choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e one hand, there are a few reasons why i agree that a vertical city brings lots ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7052238806 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59882367533 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503731343284 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0445123468 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243829285852 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871613402333 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917485790018 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18293407159 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784232837244 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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