Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that living in a private house is better than in a block of flat. I strongly agree with this idea for many reasons.
There are many reasons while people think that that youngsters are living in the apartment is the best choice. Firstly, the vertical cities are high strength security. If anyone wants to enter here people have to show the identified card and always motored by cameras everywhere. Secondly, the condominium will help the government increase land for public use. The Ho Chi Minh authorities can extend the main road through the city, this helps urban citizens easily travel inside. Besides, some parks will be created which give children place to play games or visit.
However, I concerned that to live in a horizontal city has many advantages. The initial benefit is that I do not pay any fee for parking or building. For instance, when the Vietnamese citizens live in an apartment, they have to pay a part of the salary for parking and security. Another advantage of this private place is wide individual space. The civilian could build a garden in the yard and plant various kind of vegetables that good for mental health, it also creates the green space in the city.
In conclusion, albeit some people are disagreed to own a house, I strongly believe that this is a golden chance for enjoying the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4751522871 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.631116632 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7142857143 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177090020234 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581403953541 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734643079528 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895879644451 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650588685141 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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